I have asked my target audience to give feedback on my rough cuts, which I have included below.
Front cover
This feedback is on my front cover, I asked what they like about my project so far and what they think I could improve on; this is what they said;
Likes
- The photo
- The bright colours
- The big fonts
- How clear the main feature is
- The layout
- The + sign
Improvements
- Layout
- Colours, background and fonts
- More stories
- Cut the picture out better
- Mention different artists such a Justin Beiber
- Don’t put the text so close to the line
- Barcode and date
- More features
- Use more contrasting colours
Contents page
This feedback is on my contents page , I asked what they like about my project so far and what they think I could improve on; this is what they said;
Likes
- Its neat
- Good photos
- Good colours
- The double page spread and front cover inset
- The layout of text
- Title
Improvements
- colours
- layout
- add more pages
- too plain
- looks to empty
- could be filled more
- could include something in the bottom right corner
- improve the spacing of the boxes
- introduce a third colour
Double page spread
This feedback is on my double page spread, I asked what they like about my project so far and what they think I could improve on; this is what they said;
Likes
- photo
- good presentation
- good mix of colour, photo and fonts
- branding in corner
- website advert at end of article
- look professional the background
- layout
- layout of the photo with the hearts
- words behind photo
Improvements
- the font of the article
- quotation size
- better language
- have more text
- looks a bit empty
- the bordering around text
- cut out picture better
- fonts
- no page number on one of the pages
- make columns neater
- larger article
- longer answers
- make the picture bigger and more dynamic
